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“There is no need to die,”
He stretched his long legs
And sighed,
“To experience bliss
In the here
In the now.
We need only
Allow.”
She leaned back
And exhaled
What should have long been
Expelled.
As the breeze kissed
Her cheeks,
She prepared to be
Healed,
In the Eden on Earth
Of Elysian fields.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Elysian in 56 words
Beautiful, Na’ama.
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Thank you, Dale! XOXO
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xoxo
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Perfect
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Thank you! ๐
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Lovely, Na’ama. It brought a breath of fresh air in while reading.
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Yay! Mission accomplished! ๐ Thank you!
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๐ YW!
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Such a tranquil setting. Sublime verses. Elysian Fields? I could’ve given one of my kids that name. ๐
Shabbat Shalom,
Rochelle
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I went with poetry this week. https://rochellewisoff.com/2020/02/08/weekend-writing-prompt-elysian/
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I KNOW!!! You could’ve!! And everyone would’a called him “Eli” ๐ A nice Jewish name for sure … ๐
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And … thank you for the compliment! ๐
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Simply beautiful Na’ama.
Here’s mine!
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Thanks, Keith! I’m headin’ over to read yours! ๐
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Nicely done. Therapeutic for all.
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๐ Thanks, Bill! Glad you found it so! ๐
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