
Photo: Smadar Halperin-Epshtein
There is no
Place,
No space,
Without
Voice.
If the trees of our soul
Fall
With no ears near
To hear,
Silence deafens
Roar into
Lore.
Be the voice
Of your song.
Let the air move
Through lungs
Via cords
To record:
You’re aboard.
For the dVerse Quadrille challenge: Voice
I love the way you have used the rhymes here to make the end clear.
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Thank you, Bjorn! (sorry, the accents never come through)
May voices ring clear. …
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Excellent rhymes in this! Gets the message across.
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Thank you, Kanzen! I certainly hoped it could, and I’m gratified if it does!
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This is just brilliant:
“Silence deafens
Roar into
Lore.”
And so true.
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Thank you again!
I have friends who shared with me how their grandparents never got over not speaking up during WWII Germany. How the very topic was taboo for the agony it caused. I have friends who went to the South as teenagers to support MLK’s civil rights, and friends who lived in the South at the time and whose families looked away. I have a friend who is part Japanese and whose grandparents never spoke of the internment camps or the hardship that followed when they lost EVERYTHING, including their sense of dignity and safety and belonging, when their voices were taken away from them along with their home and business and freedom. The silence that followed and the minimization — even justification — of the abused inflicted on them, made their suffering deemed insignificant even as it continued to eat holes in their souls. I have friends who are part Native American whose grandparents were forced away from home into boarding schools and whipped if they spoke their language or used their given names. The suffering became a distant story – not a real agony experienced by real people.
Some even … still … silence the pain of slavery. Some deny the holocaust.
Being silenced is traumatizing and others’ silence in the face of another’s pain is deafening.
I don’t know if a poem can convey all that, but I am glad if I managed to convey some of it.
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We all need to let folks know we are aboard. Nice job, Na’ama.
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Thank you, John. May we all manage to find a way to do so!
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🙂
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This is absolute brilliant brevity!
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Thank you, Beverly! What lovely praise! 🙂 I’m humbled.
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I enjoyed this. The “roar into lore” part was creative and impressive.
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Thank you, Jenna! 🙂
Words are so much fun, aren’t they? 🙂
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We must never be silent. Silence is implied consent. What was it MLK Jr. said, “To passively accept an unjust system is to become an active participant in its evil.” (paraphrasing)
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Yes, others had said it before him in different variations, for like all Truths, it revisits wisdom through different messengers.
To allow is to condone.
Those who stand idly by enable, by their inaction, the continuation and normalization of ugliness.
It is a CHOICE to keep ones voice from being heard when one has the opportunity to voice it.
I hope more make a choice to use it.
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The worst part is the normalization of the intolerable. Children in cages. Infants separated from mothers. Factory farms. Illegal to videotape factory farm abuses. Spraying MRSA bacteria on food crops. The list is endless…
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Normalization of the intolerable is exactly the description of what makes atrocities possible.
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Breath moves the world Na’ama. Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, Rob! Indeed without breath there is no life as we know it.
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It’s all been said so I shall just add that I love this. 🙂
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I’m so glad you do! 🙂
XOXO
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xoxo
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🙂
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“Via cords
To record:
You’re aboard”.
An impressive, direct impassioned rhythm of those culminating last lines.
I could hear them being thumped out on a lectern.
(And a crowd rising)
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Thank you. May there be a voice to all who need it, and may we be a voice to those who cannot yet use their own.
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Well said!
Sing it loud and long!!
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🙂
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Especially poignant is the tree falling in the forest of the mind, not to be heard, possibly eventually not heard by the person themself. Sometimes the deepest secrets are those we won’t speak to ourselves.
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Such an interesting comment, Lona! Thank you!
Yes, sometimes we do not hear our own fallen trees – which may be one of the biggest tragedies of the soul and of disconnect from oneself.
And yet, I hold the belief that it is never too late for one to awaken to oneself, and that the journey into restored hearing can be a lifelong one.
May we all be at home without ourselves.
Na’ama
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