
Photo: Ishan @seefromthesky on Unsplash
When the light
Aligns just right
And the ebb and flow
Combine
To sheer insight,
She breathes in
To allow
The soul expanding
Syzygy
Of hope and
Love and
Heart.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Syzygy in 30 words
Na’ama Y’karah,
GMTA. I saw the word and thought, wow, all you need is a blank tile since Scrabble only has 2 Y’s. Get it on a triple word square and pow!
At any rate, I love where you took it. Lovely poem.
Shalom and happy 4th,
Rochelle
https://rochellewisoff.com/2020/07/04/weekend-writing-prompt-syzygy/
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Thing is, while playing, I will probably forget and try to make words like Pizza and Oxymoron … π
Come to think of it … Pizza!!!! π
Happy 4th and off I go to read yours!
Na’ama
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Elegant piece, Na’ama.
And great photo.
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Thank you! Photo isn’t mine, and indeed is amazing! π
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Beautiful take,Na’ama.
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Thank you, Dale! It’s a good scrabble word with no THAT much daily use … so … of COURSE I had to … π
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Of course!! Now what the hell am I gonna go with this blasted word?
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Perhaps a little scrabble story? π LOL
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Nope
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No worries, I know you are your own woman! π
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Well done. Nothing like a little romantic syzygy,
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Or a sygyzy of any kind … π Thanks!
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This is so beautiful and light!
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π Glad you liked it!
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Delightful use of this intriguing word Na’ama.
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Thank you, Keith! It’s an odd one, for sure! π
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That is beautiful… and in those opening lines I thought I detected a hint of Aquarius
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Thank you! I didn’t think of Aquarius but I can see how the could hold faint echo of it! Amazing how the subconscious might ‘broadcast’, eh?
π
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Indeed. Everything we hear, everything we see and experience, the creative spirit within us draws upon
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Exactly! π
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Wow, this is great use of the prompt word. π
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Thank you, Kitty! π So glad it spoke to you!
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You are welcome, Na’ama Yehuda. π
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Beautiful! π
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Thank you! π
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