
(Photo: Na’ama Yehuda)
Look yonder and you may see
What has, perhaps, become
Of me.
The good, the bad, we could
Agree,
Had gone to bed and woke up
Free.
Look yonder
And you will find
A key,
To what helps us
Grow
From one, to we.
For Sammi‘s Weekend Writing Prompt: Yonder in 44 words
💚🌸💚!!!
Adele Ryan McDowell, Ph.D.
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🙂 So glad you liked! 🙂 XX
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Oh, how lovely!
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🙂 Yay! Love it that you liked it! 🙂
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I did.
Am 23 words short of completing mine 😉
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LOL. Ok…. 😉
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A little stuck. Not liking what I have produced (am at 39 words). May have to scrap and start over!
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Reduce (well, increase…), reuse, recycle? 😀
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Not good at the recycling… I do like to be fresh 😉
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😀 Fresh as daisies, then! 🙂
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Spring is in the air. Lovely to see the colours emerging 🙂
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Indeed! And many more (check my Instagram – I pretty much flood the place with photos these days … 🙂 )
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That’s so lovely!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Na’ama Y’karah,
What a lovely poem. I love that one became we. BTW, as much as I love purple, daffodils are my favorite flowers. 😀
Mine is here https://rochellewisoff.com/2021/03/27/weekend-writing-prompt-yonder/
שלום וחג פסח שמח
רחל
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Thank you, Rochelle. How fun that they are your favorite flower! Am not sure which are mine – cherry blossoms, perhaps. Not sure. I keep changing my mind … 😉
Off to read yours!
חג אביב שמח
נעמה
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Beautiful melding of words and images
I do like the emphasis brought by the use of:
‘Of me’.
‘Agree’.
‘Free’.
‘A key’.
Underlines the affirmative rhythm
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🙂 Thank you! I’m glad the rhyming worked! 🙂
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Expertly crafted. Bravo!
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Thank you, Susan! 🙂
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I do like this. Rhythm, words. Yep, I do like this
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I’m so glad! 🙂
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🙂
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