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She couldn’t have been clearer.
She couldn’t have been more firm.
Still he chose to disregard and
Pretend it wasn’t him.
She told him to pack his stuff.
She told him he must leave.
Still he chose to linger and
Refused to cleave.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Lucid in 43 words
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Sounds like someone…
Seems to me the message could not be clearer!!
Wonderful take (I might partage tomorrow)
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Yeah … I think it sounds like a lotta someones …
And … I think she made her point … 😉
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I think some choose to be so dense…
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Yep, but … it might be easier to move than unpack … 😉
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There is that…
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🙂
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Oh dear, things are about to come to a head methinks!
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Yeah, me thinks too … 😉
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Sounds like a case of selective hearing. She was clear enough. Perhaps he’s just dense enough.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Here’s mine: https://rochellewisoff.com/2020/10/17/weekend-writing-prompt-lucid/
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Well, it seems like now he might get the ‘message’ … (or not … ;)) xx
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Oh, that sounds like every potential ex before he’s finally gone.
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Yep. I think that dude needed more than a nudge … 😉
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🙂
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This made me smile, Na’ama!
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🙂 Glad it did, ceayr! 🙂 I am not sure it made the dude in the poem smile, but … 😉
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