
Photo prompt: Roger Bultot
“She keeps the shelves half-empty.”
I turned at the voice. A gnarled hand leaned heavily on a carved stick. The man’s chest was almost parallel to the stained cement floor.
I crouched so I could make eye-contact yet spare him the strain of lifting his head. He smiled. For such an ossified body, his expression was remarkably lively.
“My wife,” he raised an eyebrow at the display. “I’d space the boxes, but she says that what people think we ain’t got much of, reminds them of the empty spaces in their own pantries and how there’s always room for more.”
For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
Devious sales pitch. π
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π Or … a way to make do … given that perhaps she would’ve been happy with FULL shelves, but given what she does have available to sell, she doesn’t spread them out to “look like more” but makes her point in a different way … π Doesn’t look like that particular store is rolling in the dough … π
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Lovely character
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Thank you, Neil! π
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Clever idea, but will it work?
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I don’t know, but perhaps it is more of a ‘making do’ with having not a lot to sell than an actual philosophy … I’m not sure she’d be averse to having stacked shelves… but given that there’s not that much, she makes the choice to not spread what she does have over all the space available, but to make one section appear fuller while also, perhaps, sending psychological messages to her customers … π
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The glass is half full! Brilliant take
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π We see what we can through the eyes we can manage … π
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Must be a psychologist. Nice one.
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Thank you. Not sure that the store owner is a psychologist … but street-smart seems likely. π
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I like your description of the old guy.
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Thank you! π I could ‘see him’ in the people in my neighborhood and in other people I know … π
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Unfortunately this will be reported by the media as a food shortage in local shops! Great take.
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Thank you, Iain! And … it might even be a shortage in some local shops … but the attitude of how to ‘spread’ what one has about – whether to try and disguise it by scattering things over a wider expanse of shelves or boldly displaying it with some shelves bare … is a something even more worth reporting about … π
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I feel kindness not deviance in their sales approach. A kinship struck. Or maybe just a truth told.
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Indeed, probably all of the above but no malice. Glad it came across!
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Always look on the bright side of life…nice story.
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Yep, that half-full thing is as real as the half-empty … π
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A cunning ploy!
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Yes, ploy … or … making do and making the decision that displaying what one has without trying for it to seem more, may come across more truthfully (and perhaps resonate better with others) than trying to comb-over the relative scarcity … Doesn’t look like that shop is rolling in dough … so it may well be they are making do, too …
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A gentle, humane story. I love that your narrator crouches to make eye contact with the old man.
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π So glad you liked it! π Contact and humane connection is all any of us can hope for and should strive for, no? π
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It’s of very great importance, I agree. Bless you, Na’ama!
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π THANK YOU! π
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A topical supermarket trick. Empty shelfs creating panic buying.
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In a way, eh, James? And, we are seeing some of it in action in the Corona panics, where things from toilet paper to aloe gel to hand sanitizer to face masks are cleaned out (sorry, had to pun) and prices inflated for the few that are available – taking advantage of panic even when soap and warm water will suffice in most situations …
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I don’t see the panic over other life threatening illnesses- like sepsis for instance.
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Or the flu, which actually KILLED tens of thousands this year alone already.
Or suicide.
Or the millions of kids who are maltreated every year, often with lifelong consequences.
So, yeah, I know. It’s inexcusable to see the exploitation of people’s fears and misuse of information to deliberately confuse (e.g. not allowing access to test kits in order to “keep numbers low”)
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Delightfully different Na’ama!
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Thank you, Keith! π I’ve seen ‘bodegas’ and corner markets in some less fortunate neighborhood that looked like this … a few ‘produce’ staples next to mostly long-shelf-life packaged stuff, graffiti on the walls, half-empty shelves in the back. …
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Oy, I’m so late getting around FF this week. At any rate, I love the vivid description of the old man. His wife’s philosophy is interesting. No stress to keep her shelves full. Too bad my bakery managers didn’t feel that way. π Well done as always.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks, Rochelle! I do like the couple … Remind me of some oldsters I know and whose bent bodies belay their grit. It seems a ‘quaint’ little shop on the ‘wrong side’ of the tracks … and yet that they make do with what they have, and even make a strategy of it …
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Nice piece. Sad how important one judges on others thoughts.
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Hi Susan, yes, it is so important how we relate to and interpret other’s words and thoughts!
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I loved the way your described the endearing old man and his interaction with the customer. His wife is quite the philosopher. Lovely story, Na’ama!
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Thank you, Brenda! I have a feeling they may both be a bit philosophical, though he may not verbalize it quite as much, or let her do it for him … π
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Perfect marketing… people will rush to buy what’s left-
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Many times they would, wouldn’t they? Case in point … TP in Australia and hand sanitizer just about everywhere …
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I felt this particularly lovely and not at all devious. I love the idea of empty space being available as needed
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Me three! I didn’t think of it as devious, either, but I can see how it CAN be that, sometimes – comes to show how the same reality can be understood differently (and used differently) by different people! π
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I think it depends on the reader… I don’t automatically think negative. Not cynical enough π
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I hear ya! I don’t tend to think automatic-negative, either. Not exactly naive, but I tend to think best of people till proven otherwise. Am okay with that. π
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Yep! Why be negative…
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Exactly. Why be negative when it can just as well be the opposite, eh? π
I like how you thinkin’!
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O’ course!! And I’m officially in La Guardia
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Welcome to NY! Can you see me jumping up and down in Manhattan and waving the “WELCOME DALE” flag? If you aren’t sure what you’re seeing — the one who’s nuts is me. π
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Aren’t you the one directly below that fantabulous moon? I’m sure it’s you…
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If it’s howling just a little bit and drinking hot cocoa and waving the “WELCOME DALE” sign, then it is DEFINITELY me. π
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Woot!! π
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BTW, thanks for sending nice weather ahead for us! π
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Uhhh. K…
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