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As her eyes finally
Closed
And her breath
Not returned,
She knew
What awaited her
Just
‘Round the bend:
A new journey
Ascends
Life beyond
Epoch’s end.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Epoch in 27 words
Note: Dedicated to all who face the final journey … and thus to all … for we all would. May we walk life’s path the way we can and should.
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Na'ama Yehuda 
And it sounds like a peaceful way to go to her next journey… Sweetly done
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Thank you, Dale! I hope it will be a peaceful passage for all of us, when the time comes. Hugs your way!
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Don’t we all!!
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Eza’tly!
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couldn’t comment on YOUR post … but … have a LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY time!!!!!
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No?? Lemme check!!
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Yeah, I couldn’t leave a comment there … Perhaps it is the same issue I’d had with my posts a couple of times of late. Not sure why it happens. I hope it gets fixed and I’ll leave a comment there, too!
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I can’t see why… And the mobile app ain’t helping…
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hmmm … oy.
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Go into ‘edit’ and then ‘more options’ and see if you can click ‘on’ the comments manually.
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There isn’t any…
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Oy. I don’t know enough about the mobile app to know how to resolve it but I hope it works out and MOST IMPORTANTLY — I want to wish you a fantabulous time!
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Fixed!!
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Yay! I’m scooting over right now!
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Woot!
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🙂
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Way too many people I know lately have faced that epoch. Well written. We should all go in peace.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. I can relate, and I know more epochs are soon to come for some I care about. It is part of the cycle of life, but it does not make it less painful for us who are left behind. And … yes, we should all go in peace.
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