“Where does it lead?” Mina crouched and tried to peer behind the metal grate. The concrete tube curved away.
“To the factory,” Josh replied distractedly. Her derriere was hanging utterly too close to the water.
“Are you checking me out?” she teased. She knew he preferred men.
“More like watching out for you,” he pouted. His friend could read his mind even when her back was turned. He loved and hated her for it.
She twisted to peek at him. “The danger being?”
“Getting wet.”
Mina laughed. Josh was fussier than her own mother. “I won’t melt.”
“Not from normal water, you wouldn’t, but there’s a reason the factory was ordered closed, and why authorities reinforced the grates on this culvert. Only God and the now-dead-factory-owners-and-workers know what’s in there. I don’t like this.”
Mina’s witty retort fizzled when she caught sight of movement, barreling toward the grate.
She screamed.
For Crispina’s Crimson’s Creative Challenge #60
Great story!
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Thank you, Roth! 🙂
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Wow! Fully unexpected, every part of it. Like how you developed the friends’ relationship, in so few words, and effectively implied more than the average level of danger.
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Yay! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, lots above the average level of danger in these waters, eh? 😉
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Indeed 🙂
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