“It is looking at me.”
“What is?” I was dozing off in the delicious sun on the first dry weekend we’d had in a while. The lush grass under me felt springy.
I thought the word was so apt. Springy. The double meaning of the season and the bouncy vivaciousness of it all.
“It is looking at me.”
I inhaled slowly with more resignation than irritation. I might’ve known this would not go as I had envisioned. While I was content to lie still and let the sounds of the birds and the hiss of the breeze and the faraway whir of a tractor in someone’s field fill and nourish me, Marlee had been tugging on grass-blades and clucking her tongue and shifting positions every three seconds.
She’s always been flighty. A flit-bit full of frown and furrow, forever on the edge of tumbling from one thing to another.
I loved it about her. She was the counter-weight to my molasses and the engine to my stasis. Her hypervigilance also made my idea of a relaxing afternoon where we do nothing, an utterly foreign thing.
Perhaps an even frightening one.
I opened my eyes. “What’s looking at you?”
“That.”
I raised myself on an elbow and scanned the field. There was no one there.
Marlee sat, violin-string-tight, eyes glued ahead.
I followed her line of sight. Nothing. Not even a bunny. Just a tractor that most likely belongs to the farmer whose land we might be trespassing on. I squinted against the glare – the cab was empty – there was no one there.
Marlee did not move.
Resigned now, I sat up and stared harder. A caterpillar undulated up a flower’s stem by my knee. A bird dove at the tractor, perched momentarily on a mirror, and flew away.
“The bird?” I chanced.
Marlee shook her head but her eyes remained trained on the vehicle. “The tractor,” she said. “That thing has eyes. I swear it blinked at me.”
For Crimson’s Creative Challenge
What a cool tractor 😀
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Crispina’s tractor photo!!!
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This is extraordinary, love the imagery conjured, the command of the language. I’m guessing it wasn’t reeled straight out of your head, though there’s not a sign of strain. Well done.
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Thank you, Crispina! What generous praise!
As per the reel-factor … I’m afraid my brain conjures lotta reels … unpredictably at times, and quite volubly (as the word-count evidenced… 😉 ).
THANK YOU!
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But that’s a symptom … or by-product … of creativity
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🙂 Probably … though I’m not really sorry about this particular ‘symptom’ … 😉
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Yea. Agreed on that
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🙂
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Very clever. And from an SF perspective, slightly disturbing too!…. Nice!
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Yep … because … maybe it did blink. At her. Who knows. And why did the bird flee? And so … ?
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We are in Ray Bradbury or Stephen King territory.
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Perhaps, eh?
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Oh for certain
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🙂
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