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“Why would anyone choose this tomb?”
Sally’s voice ricocheted in the clearing. I felt my face flush and dug my nails into my palms to keep from responding.
“I realize they don’t need light, but what do they have against air?”
“They’re blind, you know, not deaf,” Mark noted dryly. I could’ve kissed him.
Sally shrugged. She leaned forward and slapped the wall. “Thick walls. I bet they’re as good as.”
“Or not.”
Sally boomeranged off the wall as if electrocuted.
A hand waved out of an arrow slit, two inches from her waist.
I grinned.
“Come right in. Dinner’s ready.”
For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
Na'ama Yehuda 
And that was the last anyone saw of Sally!
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LOL! Perhaps!
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That would shut her up quick!!
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Yep, seems it did… 😉
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Stone houses can be intimidating. Don’t blame Sally.
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I don’t blame her for being intimidated… but I don’t particularly like her behavior… 😉
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I loved what you did with the loop hole, spot on.
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Thanks, Michael! 🙂 I did enjoy that little play on words. So glad you caught it! Thank you for stopping by and for the comment, Na’ama
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Dear Na’ama,
What’s for dinner? Egg on Sally’s face? Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS for a reread, I’m here: https://rochellewisoff.com/2018/10/10/5-october-2018/
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It seems so … 😉
Thanks, Rochelle! Sometimes people can be clueless, eh? But, hopefully she’ll have learned from this (somehow I’m skeptical of it but one never knows…) Na’ama
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Hopefully a lesson learned here …
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I sure hope so, Jilly! 🙂
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A fun post. Sally needs to get a clue.
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Totally! 🙂 Thanks!
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Yikes!
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I hope that’s not at the writing but at the character .. 😉
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Ha,ha. Indeed! The character, yes. 🙂
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Whew. I went fishing for that one, but … yeah! Thanks! 🙂
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