“So it’s full of juice?”
Robin rolled her eyes. Her brother was too thick for his own good.
“No, Dufus. It is hollow. Or mostly.”
The boy’s eyes stared glassily.
“Don’t know what hollow means, do you?”
He shook his head and tugged on her hand pleadingly.
Robin sighed. Little brothers should come with language already fully installed.
“It means it has space inside. Like a balloon. Sort of. Only it won’t pop.”
Donnie glanced at the sphere and the concession stand at its bottom. “A juice balloon?”
Robin snorted. “Can you imagine?”
Donnie grinned.
Apparently, they both could.
For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
Photo: © Dale Rogerson
Love it! And don’t you love how kids understand things so literally?
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Totally! I adore it! Probably why I still work with kids after all these years and why I still have a melt-on-sight response to most of them … 🙂 Too cute!
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You are definitely in the right profession. I envy you!
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I so totally am!!!! 🙂 I wish for EVERYONE to have a profession where they still love it as much if not more after more than 30 years and are still learning throughout. And … the kids are DELICIOUS! 🙂
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You see, me? I can’t do the kids thing… I love mine because, well, they’re mine and I have to 😉 And my sisters’ kids, coz they’re family but outside of that? Meh! 😉
But yeah, it must be so cool to love what you do. Sigh.
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LOL, I’m a mush when it comes to kids. Babies, especially, give me a melt-on-sight reaction. When we used to go to restaurants, you know, when the world still worked as intended, my friends would position me so I could not see any other tables, because they know that if a baby entered the premises, my attention would inevitable wander … LOL
Granted, kids can be grating, especially some behaviors, but more often than not, I find children (yes, even teens) to be delightful. There’s a freshness to their view that is fun and insightful and funny. 🙂
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Buahahaha! Yeah, not my case. At all. My neighbour was like that from the age of 5!
I was sitting in my backyard trying to finish this wonderful book by an awesome author, you might know her? She goes by the name of Na’ama Yehuda. Anyway, two houses down the kids were screaming and crying… I wanted to kill them. My direct neighbours have two kids also and their pool is next to the fence so. Yeah, there are days when I just have to go inside.
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🙂 Wait … which book are you reading now? Or, were you referring to when you were trying to peacefully finish reading Outlawed Hope?
Also, I do love kids, but it doesn’t mean they can’t be annoying (and/or the adults who are supposed to help them not be screaming/crying …). Sometimes, yeah, you need to go inside … but I wish your neighbors were less … um … grating … 😉
(P.S. I LOVE being an “awesome author” 🙂 )
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No, now I’m reading Claire Fuller’s “Unsettled Ground”. This is when I was trying to peacefully read yours. Yes, usually when kids are annoying, it’s the parents I wanna smack.
Well, you ARE an awesome author! 😀
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I thought you’d meant OH over the weekend, but just wanted to double check. Because, you know, vanity … 😀
And … yeah, it is often the parents/caregivers that are at least a big part of (if not THE) the issue. …
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Yes, yes. I did. You know I finished it when I did! 🎼 You’re so vain… 😉
I would say in at least 75% of the cases…
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😀
(And now I have an earworm … sheesh … 😉 )
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EXCELLENT! Your punishment for it 😉
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LOL!!!! 😀
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They found common ground at last!
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A Juice balloon would be so very nice for all the thirsty young uns on a hot day~
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Would now, wouldn’t it, Larry?
I think I would try to get in the kid line, because I won’t mind some of that juice on a hot day, either … 🙂
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I love how the little brother’s imaginative innocence finally won over the older sister. If only we could all see the world like that.
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If only more of us could, and if only we could do so more often, eh? I agree! 🙂 Thank you for the comment! 🙂
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Na’ama,
No doubt about it: kids have a great sense of the absurd.
pax,
dora
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🙂 Yep, them do! 🙂
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“Little brothers should come with language fully installed.” Loved that phrase. Well done.
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Thank you, Sandra! I am pretty sure this is a thought that some older siblings have … 😉
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I love the language-installed idea, too. I want several languages installed, please. Great story.nice and I want to sit outside, too. 😀
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I was about to mention that I had screaming kids as neighbours, too. Then I deleted it as irrelevant, and that’s why this weird fragment is left at the end of my comment, sorry.
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It is not irrelevant…. it is reality that is wide-spread … 😉
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Sadly… understand the need of kids to scream and run and play… but all day, and always? Augh…
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Run and play? Yes. Scream? No …
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I remember when I was a kid (eons ago) and playing in the yard with other kids, there was this woman yelling from her window that we had to be quiet or else… I don’t want to be this woman. Some screaming is OK. But not all day… whine… 😀
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Ah … yeah … we don’t want to be THAT woman … LOL (and whining is almost worse than screaming … 😉 )
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WHAT? Have some cheese with my whine. 😉
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😀 LOL My friend and I used to have “Whine parties” while she was going through her cancer treatments and was generally feeling icky. It was a way to vent in the midst of an overall non-whining attitude. She was a real trooper through it all. But everyone needs a place to whine, once in a while. …. (I don’t mind cheese …).
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🙂 Hugs to you and your friend. Everyone needs a good whine from time to time. Within limits…
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Thank you! My friend is no longer with us for some years now. She passed away. However, I still always smile when I think of our ‘whine, no cheese parties’. And yes, we all need a place to vent once in a while!
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I’m sorry to hear that. Good that you have smiling memories.
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Thank you. Yes, her passing some years ago has been a big loss to all off us who loved her. But I’m grateful for the lovely memories. 🙂
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🙂 I wouldn’t mind a few more languages installed either … 🙂
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Great idea, children with language pre-installed, and perhaps manners as well–or would that take the fun out of watching them grow trying to understand their world.
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Ah! Manners! Yes, lets add that to the pre-installed software! 😉 Then again … I see your point … Can we have the manners kick in at a certain age? Say, in adults? Some are SERIOUSLY lacking … 😉
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What a fun tale.
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😀 Glad you liked! 🙂
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After scoffing at her little brother, it turns out Robin still has a lot of child in her heart 🙂
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🙂 Indeed very much so! 🙂
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That’s a very cute little tale this week. So endearing.
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🙂 Thank you! We need some of that, too … 🙂
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Yes, indeedy, we do! 🙂 ❤
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😀
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What a fun story and great dialogue between the big sister and the wee brother. ‘Little brothers should come with language already fully installed.’ i love that.
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😀 Glad you enjoyed it! And … I have me a feeling that many a parent and many a teacher sometimes find themselves wishing for it, too. … 🙂
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Are you sure you never had a little brother? Such natural dialogue. Kids. Gotta love em. I remember when my eldest son came home from school with a new bit of knowledge and excitedly told me that in some countries fish eggs were a great delicatessen.
Love this and I love your love and passion for children. It comes through so vividly and charmingly in your writing.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Not a little brother (we are all girls!) but two younger sisters and I’ve been an aunt and a nieces-and-nephews sitter since age 10 … so the situation is … well … familiar … 😉
Also, yes, kids are delightful this way, aren’t they? I do love it that he heard that fish eggs are a great delicatessen … 😀
🙂 Thanks for this lovely comment, my friend!
Na’ama
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This is absolutely delightful. I could sense her frustration tinged as it was with sisterly affection.
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Thanks, Keith … yes to all … 😉
And, so glad you liked it! Kids do make me laugh and I’m a big softy for their straight-forward reasoning and antics.
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I love this relationship, so real!
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I’m so glad you like it! 🙂 I admit having fun penning this. 🙂
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I like how the older sister gave in to her little brother’s imagination. It’s more fun!
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It is, isn’t it?!!! 🙂 And … there’s no harm done in hoping for a juice balloon … 😉
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Good story, Na’ama. You told it well through the dialogue. I really liked “Little brothers should come with language already fully installed.”
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🙂 Thanks, Penny. It seems to have resonated with quite a few of us … perhaps it is a universal wish … LOL
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Ah little brothers. Love-hate stuff. Fun story.
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😎 Glad you liked!
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After the tension in the story, I loved how they both laughed at the same thing–perfect understanding between them 🙂
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I’m so glad you liked it! Thanks, Linda! 🙂
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