There was a mystery
To their madness.
An uncanny sense of
Doom.
But she did not flail
Afraid
In darkness,
Whilst she could spot a petal
Bloom.
Instead, she watched
With rapt intention
As life suffused
Their eerie
Gloom.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Uncanny in 39 words
Full of hope! Love it!
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I’m so glad you liked it! And … yes! Here’s to hope! 🙂
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I love it, Na’ama! I am rapt with love for the spring season blooming before us.
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Yeah! Me three! I’m enraptured and completely dazzle-eyed with the glory of it (as my oh-so-frequent-photos on other platforms all but declare!) 🙂 I’m so glad we share this enamored-with-spring thing.
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Absolutely! You’ve been sharing some truly lovely pics!! 🙂
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THANKS! Nature does the lovely, I just try to capture it with the phone. … 🙂
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Ya do good!!
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A lovely prompt for the start of spring.
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🙂 Thanks, Iain! 🙂
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Like how you’ve tied this in to the crocus, a wonderful of spring, so often at a time of darkened skies
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Thanks! And … it is not only about the crocus, but a lot about what it represents … which you ‘got’! 🙂
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🙂 Yep 🙂
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Na’ama Y’karah,
You are the flower child lately. I love all your photos. (Might even paint one one of these days. 😉 ) It’s uncanny what you did with the word. ❤
Shalom,
Rochelle
I went for sappy this week. https://rochellewisoff.com/2021/04/18/weekend-writing-prompt-uncanny/
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Thanks, my friend! (I’m remiss on FF this week but am still holding hope I’ll get to it before the next one …). Aren’t the flowers absolutely magnificent????? If there’s one that catches your brush-holding-fingers, let me know. xoxo Na’ama
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A lovely message, a glorious season and a pretty little crocus! Noce one Na’ama!
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Thank you, Keith! 🙂
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