The car honked twice then twice again before the tires crunched on gravel and the vehicle left in a puff of midday dust.
She smiled.
She could always count on Henry.
There was a time when he could ring her bell. When she could offer him a glass of lemonade.
Not now, so close to her transplant date.
She waited a moment before venturing to the gate, and smiled again when she saw he’d taken the card she’d left. She knew he’d made a special trip.
He brought the birthday cake from her daughter, still cold, wrapped in fancy tape.
For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
A good deed!
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Indeed! 🙂
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Wonderful storytelling, Na’ama. So much said in 100 words. Sounds like he’s a real friend.
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Wonderful storytelling, Na’ama. So much said in 100 words. Sounds like they share a real friendship.
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How beautifully heartwarming. 💖
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🙂 Yay! Glad you liked! 🙂
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How can I not?
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😀 Hey, free country … 😉
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he he he… right.
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😀
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I enjoyed the feeling and the context, i.e. the reference to the transplant.
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🙂 I’m glad you enjoyed it. I know that isolation has all kind of associations these days, but for some people the realities of being careful around other people and wearing masks and keeping distance … did not start with the current pandemic and thankfully (I hope) people did not quantify their need for being careful or what others could do to protect THEM as somehow a weakness or a caprice.
Having worked with some children who needed a bone-marrow transplant, and with other immuno-compromized persons, I can appreciate the power of kindness we can extend by taking care to do what WE can to ease their burden, even if there is supposedly no immediate ‘benefit’ (or ‘risk’) to us.
Here’s to kindness.
Thank you for this comment – I have used it for a bit of a soapbox … not directed at you at all, of course. 🙂
Na’ama
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A friend of mine in Israel had to isolate from his own family, during the lock-down, before he could be operated. He donated a kidney for a transplant. So your story really resonated with me. And it did not feel like you were talking from a soapbox.
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Whew … Glad it didn’t because I wouldn’t have wanted you to feel preached-to, when that was not my intent at all. Yes, I know of others who had to isolate before surgery (including for donating marrow). It is a noble thing to do for another, and it is one of the few things, sometimes, that one can DO to help another in a truly life-and-death situation. Good on him!
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Good on Henry 🙂
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Yeah, Henry is a good man! 🙂
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Such a heartwarming story ♥️
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Glad you found it so, Shweta! ::)
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Beautifully understated. A very sweet read.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle! The fancy tape on the box did it for me. The rest just flowed to it. 🙂
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Well told story. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks! 🙂 I liked the tape on the box, and though I didn’t ‘know’ what was in it when I started the story, I did ‘know’ it was a gift … and so it went and wrote itself … 🙂
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🙂 You’re on a roll.
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LOL!!!!!
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Lovely!
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Thank you! 🙂
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What a nice chap!
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True! And some of them really are! 😃
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Such a kind person! Lovely story!
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Thank you! Yes! Isn’t it amazing that we have real people who are this kind!? 🙂 And we do!
Na’ama
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Simply delightful and refreshingly different. Love it!
Here’s mine!
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Glad you liked it! The fancy tape did it for me .. 😉
Off to read yours!
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methinks he deserves more than a glass of lemonade next time. 🙂
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🙂 I think they may well have a little celebration once she’s well enough!
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Touching tale, Na’ama
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Thank you Ceayr! I’m behind on reading others’ but will get to it tonight! 🙂
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A reminder that for some people the way we’ve been living for four months is a fairly permanent way of life. Good one.
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True! And for some it’s temporary but not related to covid-19 at all (though it may well be complicated further by it, as we know).
Thanks, Sandra!
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Oh, sometimes one of these stories brings on a chill when reading, or maybe a tear. This was one of those.
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Oh, thank you for this great, generous feedback! I’m delighted!
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This is a delightful story, full of warmth and giving and kindness. Thank you.
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I’m glad you liked it, Alicia! 🙂 There’s a lot of that giving and warmth and kindness in the world, only that all too often the cold, unkind takers tend to get more of the attention. Outrage gets more eyeballs than small acts of everyday kindness …
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It’s strange, the little things can make us smile the most.
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Perhaps because it is about connection and about being seen and about being cared about and about the human interactions that matter … 🙂
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Small acts of kindness make our world a nicer place to live. I think we appreciate them so much more given our world situation. Lovely, Na’ama!
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Thank you, Brenda! Yes, here’s to acts of kindness and the humanity we can all share, if we so choose.
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There’s a bittersweet melancholy to this. The isolation is bad enough, but the poor woman’s alone on her birthday while awaiting a transplant. That’s rough.
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There is so much depth of feeling in this simple story. A reminder of the little things. ❤
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Thank you, Anne. Yes to the little things! 🙂
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Heartwarming in so few words.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Awwww this is lovely!
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An act of kindness, to be celebrated.
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yes, and YES! 🙂
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