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I nicked Nick
With a stick
After he picked
And tried to hit
Me
With a brick.
He should not try
Such a sick
Kind of shtick
If he doesn’t like
Being tricked
And summarily pricked
By a royally ticked
But quick thinking
Chick.
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Heehee! Fun stuff! 🙂
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T’was!!! 🙂 Glad you liked it! 🙂
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LOL. Terrific, Na’ama
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LOL. It was fun to do! Because … well… 😉
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Say no more.
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LOL!
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Nick sounds a bit icky. Stick with Mickey…
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🙂 Good advice, that. 😉
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Nick is thick as a brick
& deserves to be tricked with your stick
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I think as you think! 😉
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Nick is a dick
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Whether he is or is not, he messed with the wrong chick … 😉
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Fun and funny poem!
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‘Twas meant to be, so now it is happy that it did it’s job and will go drink some lemonade at the dVerse pub! 🙂
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Nice chuckle there; the young mind captured and replayed. 🙂
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And no so young mind … too, if threatened … 😉
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Indeed 🙂
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Loved the theme and the “ick” 🙂
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Cuz hitting with a brick is very very ick! 😉
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Now that was fun! Love the photo too!
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Thanks, Louise! So glad you liked it! I certainly had fun with it! 🙂
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Love this!
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🙂 Thanks, Linda! It made me laugh even as I typed, so I figured, what the heck … 🙂
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Yes! Very limerick like.
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🙂
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Oh so clever!! What a quick chick you are!
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Thanks, Beverly! It was a lickety split chuckle to spit … 😉
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all the rhymes!
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So glad you liked it! 🙂
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a hilarious fun poem … you were a quick chick to nick this one 🙂
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Well, ‘Tis best to be quick if someone’s coming at you with a brick … 😉
Thanks, Kate! 🙂
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yes fight them off with a stick!
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🙂 Exactly! 🙂
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Well, our quadrilles are cousins of the quill, our minds bent toward fun and limerick and smiles. Read aloud, they even scan the same; smile.
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Thanks, Glenn! I’m glad you found it smile-worthy! It was certainly fun to write! 🙂
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Loved this, especially the rhyme. An enjoyable read.
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Thank you Arcadia! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! 🙂 This was the idea … 🙂 AND, it was just fun to write. I even cracked myself up … 😉
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I”m gonna sic that chick with the stick on my unwelcome pr***K!
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I thought you might… 😉
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Of course you did.
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Ha!! I’m smiling from ear to ear at the thought of the ticked chick with a nicked Nick. Well done!
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Thank you! I am very pleased! Ear to ear smiles are the best! 🙂
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Silly Nick! Never mess with a chick!
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Indeed, silly Nick! 😉 Cuz we chicks can be ticked! 😉
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Hah! You made me smile and then end. Fun post!
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Yay, Lillian! Smiling was the intended reaction! 🙂 Yea, this was a LOTTA fun to write! 🙂 Thanks!
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