
Photo: Amitai Asif
“Every pot can be
A teapot
But not all of them can make
Sufficiently
Good tea,”
He said, and fussed
And set the bag
To rest
On the edge
To breathe
For me.
“I’ll take coffee,”
Said the mother,
Contrary just because
She had the right
To be.
For Sammi’s Weekend Writing Prompt: Teapot in 48 words
I chuckle at that contrary ending π
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π Glad you did! π
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And some folks are just like that, aren’t they?
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Yep. Some shore are! π
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Clever commentaries on one simple picture.
Very good and so observant.
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Thank you!
I’m glad the ‘vibe’ got across π
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That, it did π
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Ah, there are those people. Nicely written
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Thanks, Jo! There are indeed … π
And .. THANK YOU! π
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Yes, Mothers have the right.
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Them do. π
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Na’ama Y’karah,
Mothers usually do have a right to be contrary. π I like the way you set the family dynamic in a few words and over tea to boot. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Mine is here. https://rochellewisoff.com/2019/08/31/weekend-writing-prompt-teapot/ π
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Hopping (well, still moving more like molasses, but still…) right over! π
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π Yep, I think mothers have a special array of rights to call on – some utilize it more than others, but the right to contrary remains … π
Thank you for the praise! π
Yay!
Na’ama
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