Photo prompt: Dale Rogerson
“I want to go up, Papa!”
He looked down at the downy head, at the small frail finger pointing at the Big Wheel. “It is too high, Son.”
Your heart can’t take the excitement, he thought but didn’t say. The rain made tracks on his cheeks but he didn’t wipe them. The hospital said he could take the boy home. There was not much they could do for his son anymore.
“I want to go up, Papa,” the child insisted. “I want to meet the rain there. It will be my friend tomorrow … when I go live in the sky.”
For Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
- Dedicated with much love to E., who I’m certain is excellent friends with the sky and the rain … and whose promise to send “hellos with the rain” broke our hearts even as it had become the gift of healing and courage to her parents.
קצר וכל כך מרגש בפשטות הנרמזת אך ברורה. נפלא.
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Toda! 🙂
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So beautiful. So tender. So poignant. Thank you.
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Adele Ryan McDowell,
AdeleRyanMcDowell.com Adeleandthepenguin.com MakingPeacewithSuicide.com Channeledgrace.com
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Thank you, Adele!
Children are great at telling it like it is, aren’t they? XOXO Na’ama
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Oh my word. Heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time x
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Thank you … and … the child this flash-fiction wad dedicated to was indeed beautiful in every way possible.
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Na’ama
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So beautifully penned dear Na’ama, what an amazing child 💜🕊 xxx
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Thank you, my dear. She was, and the Big Wheel picture in the rain made me think about her — which was another “rain hello.” 🙂
XOXO
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I don’t know whether you saw the heart-shaped raindrop in my earlier post, your words just reminded me: https://tranature.com/2019/03/20/wordless-wednesday-green-wonder/ xxx
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I hadn’t seen it and am so glad you linked it here! Wow. Just wow. And … yes … perfect!
XOXO
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💞💜💞 xxx
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Oh, that brought tears. It’s a beautiful tribute to E, Na’ama.
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Thank you, Penny.
She was a wonder. Still is, on the soul level. I think of her often, and I know her parents do, and more so every time it rains.
“Every raindrop a hello.”
xoxo
Na’ama
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What a beautiful tribute..
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Thank you, Violet!
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Too sad for words…
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Yes. I can think of few things sadder than children who are taken from us, for all children are to young to die.
XOXO
Na’ama
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And I shouldn’t have read this at work! My heart… God bless you! I love this precious dedication!
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Thank you, Kevin … glad this spoke to you … (and I’m sorry for the heartache at work …).
Children do teach us, all the time, don’t they?
Na’ama
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The dedication makes this story extra special. Beautiful.
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Thank you!
She was an extra special child! (aren’t they all, though?)
Na’ama
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Out of the mouths of fragile babes… I imagine if Austin (age 7.5 months) could speak, he would have known when his time was coming, too. As my friend, Margaret’s, daughter, Johanne (aged 12) did…
This was heartwarming, to me…
D
XOXO
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Thank you, Dale.
They know, don’t they? On some level or another, they know. I’m thinking, E. and Austin and Johanne and other children who’d passed on well before their time are … dancing in the rain today, sending friendship hellos in every rain drop. …
Hugs and Kisses
Na’ama
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Absolutely. I am positive they know.
And such a sweet image.
Lotsa love,
Dale
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XOXO
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Beautiful and yet such a heartbreaking tribute.
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Thank you …
It is raining today in NYC and I’m thinking — it is another hello from E. and from the other children who have become friends with the rain and the sky …
Na’ama
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Poor little lad. Heartbreaking.
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Thank you, yes … these stories (and the realities they are based on) always are … Thank you for reading and commenting! Na’ama
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Na’ama Y’karah,
This just made my heart ache. The innocence of the boy comes through as does his courage and acceptance. So much in so few words. Beautifully written.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle … It’s indeed a story of both innocence and courage in the child, and a lot of the latter in the parent, too. Very much like the child — and family — I’ve dedicated this story to. I can imagine little more heartbreaking than losing a child, let alone one so young.
And it is raining today, which of course, makes me think of E.’s “each rain drop a hello” …
May there be healing galore and friendship, too.
Happy Purim,
Na’ama
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Oh, my heart! This is written with such pathos and joy, both at the same time. Thank you for giving us a piece so very special this week.
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Thank you, Linda.
I’m glad both came through, because both would be true for the child this is dedicated to … and for the lessons of living fully and loving fully that she’d given us all.
Thank you for reading and commenting,
Na’ama
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A heartrending story.
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Thanks, Sandra.
It is based on a real one … and … yes …
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Na’ama
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Sounds like a child who understands more than the father gives them credit for. Such children understand mortality, for sure.
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Indeed, many do! It is heartbreaking to realize, and yet, it is important to validate their experience and not put our own fears into it. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Na’ama
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Very well narrated a father’s dilemma to take a child, who is not well, up the wheel. But child knows he does not have many days left. Why not give him that happiness.
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Indeed, Abhijit, this is the dilemma of the father and I hope that he’d taken the boy up on the wheel, even if he’d feared it might be too much for the child–not much is left to do for him but give him joy …
Thank you for a great comment!
Na’ama
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What a poignant and heartbreaking story. Makes my heart ache.
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Thank you … and yes, these realities are always, without fail, heartbreaking. May there be less children taken in the spring of their lives, and less need for them to go say hello to the sky.
Thank you for reading and commenting,
Na’ama
Na’ama
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You are welcome, Na’ama
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Beautiful and sad and the added information about E is hearbreaking. But at the same time it’s uplifting, children can see what is most important, and look at the world with different eyes from us jaded adults. From now on rain will be a different experience.
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Yes, it is sad and uplifting, both. It is always a tragedy when children are taken from us, and there is special heartbreak to illness in children that cannot be made better. And yet, there is much courage and matter-of-fact view combined with magic and a touch of awe that children bring, even to these tragic circumstances. I know I never look at rain quite the same again, and that is a gift that dear child had left with us all.
Thank you for reading, and for this lovely comment,
Na’ama
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